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its not normal for me to write something, specially a poem without it being homework, but this just came to me, im no 'spert on poems so it might suck



will it ever stop
on it rages
it leaves me no chance
it puts every second behind
no care to relenquish with acquiscence
will it ever give periodic bliss

the time a rampant devil
not of inferno but frigid clarity
it stings at me
i try to hide myself from it, fleet its enrapture
surreal success is vain
maybe i'll continue my efforts
under the concatenation of hopes
the enshroudment of futility
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Default  10.02.02, 19:58:55
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Hey, pretty good! Some nice words there.
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Default  10.02.02, 22:22:25
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hey thanks rok =) !
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Default  10.09.02, 23:13:20
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Great poem Kevinator. Really big words. Write some more stuff. I like your style...just sorta free form and revealing. I expect more poems out of you ASAP. Good luck in the contest too!

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