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09.23.02, 14:20:59
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Isn't it Funny?
Isn't it funny?
The way these things turn out?
We both wanted the same thing,
Yet we were in doubt,
Isn't it absurd?
That we couldn't be?
Then things started to change,
And then you suddenly saw me,
Isn't it strange?
That we weren't always friends?
Even when we had our problems,
We could always make amends,
Isn't it peculiar?
That we were always there?
We'd always try to listen to each other,
Even if it were things we couldn't bear,
Isn't it curious?
That I loved you so?
I'd always try to hide it,
You weren't supposed to know,
Isn't it amusing,
That you loved me so,
And didn't try to hide it,
You wanted to let me know,
Isn't it funny?
The way things turned out to be?
We both wanted the same thing,
And now you've enraptured me...

The open line
Okay, I write one line,
I write the next, right?
So you understand now?
I believe I do, love.
You see, things weren't...
Always this way...
One time we used to...
Fight and argue...
But those days are...
Over now, we are...
Together now, so much...
Pleasure, yet so much...
Pain. To live without...
You, is to live without...
Air. To live without...
You, is to live without...
Water. To live without...
You, is to live without...
Living at all. I couldn't...
Breathe without air, and...
I can't breathe without...
You. I can't see without...
Your guidance. I can't feel...
Without you feeling it too...
I can't exist without you...
Existing along side me...
I can't laugh without...
You laughing with me...
So we are one in the same...
We are one another, we are...
One being in two separate...
Lives. Two celestial beings...
Destined to meet. We are...
Meant for each other. We...
Will always be meant for...
Each other. We will never...
Lose each other. We...
Will always be together...
Never apart. I love you...
Too deeply to ever hurt...
You. I look into your eyes...
And I see myself in them...
I see part of me in you and...
I love it. I love to see my...
Influence reflected in you...
I love to watch you smile...
I love to hear you laugh...
I love to watch your words...
Unfold in front of me...
And form the words I so...
Look forward to seeing...
At the end of every day...
You are my soul mate...
Kindred spirits. To have...
Finally found one so like...
Me and yet so different...
Is indescribable. Words to...
Describe your perfection...
Do not exist. Only the sight...
Of you brings your perfection...
Into the light. You are completely...
Flawless, so...
Every second with you is...
Bliss.
Every moment with you is...
Rapture.
Every day with you is...
Ecstasy.
Every breath with you is...
Paradise.
Every line of poetry is...
Dead.
Without you in it...
Everything about you...
And everything about us...
Is pure and ultimate...
True and never ending...
Love.

I wrote these two poems about a certain someone in my life at the time. I missed him so much when he was gone and that's essentially what the second one was about. The first one was about how it all worked out in the end. I loved you dearly, Mitch, and still do as a friend. *cuddles and escapes with dignity*
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Default  09.23.02, 15:10:51
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*tear*

Aww, Rei, your so sweet. And you're a great writer, I could never to anything like that. Great job on the poem, and thanks. *hugs*
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Default  09.24.02, 12:11:54
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Whatever you do...
Kick me,
Hit me,
Slap me to the ground,
Hate me,
Judge me,
Keep my hopes bound,
Kiss me,
Twist me,
Do whatever you please,
Own me,
Scold me,
Keep me on my knees,
Hurt me,
Train me,
Chain me to the wall,
Pawn me,
Sell me,
Make me feel small,
Hold me,
Love me,
Make the pain leave,
Burn me,
Kill me,
Cause me to grieve,
Be there,
Be here,
Kiss it better now,
Embrace me,
Teach me,
Let me learn how,
Harm me,
Love me,
Whatever you do,
Harm me,
Or love me,
I'll still love you...

All Alone
I can't take this anymore,
I'm sitting here, alone,
In a crowded room,
Where are you now?
I can't take this anymore,
I'm standing here, alone,
On a crowded street,
Where are you now?
I can't take this anymore,
I'm waiting here, alone,
On a crowded world,
Where are you now?
I can't take this anymore,
I am here, alone,
In a crowded vacuity,
Where are you now?
I can't take this anymore,
I am here, with you,
In an empty crowd,
And I finally understand,
Where you were...

The Boy
If I were a rose,
You'd be my thorn,
If I were to die,
You'd be born,
If I were a tear,
You'd be a smile,
If I were agreement,
You'd be denial,
If I were the wind,
You'd be the rain,
If I were to be different,
You'd stay the same,
If I were a breath,
You'd be a sigh,
If I were low,
You'd take me high,
If I were reality,
You'd be a dream,
If I were on my own,
We'd make a team,
If I were to miss,
You'd help me win,
If I were to tumble,
You'd stop me falling in,
If I were to fall,
You'd see me home,
Cause when I'm with you,
I know I'm not alone...

Never Alone
Never,
Alone,
Being Alone,
Is being,
Where no one,
Cares about you,
So why do you,
Feel so alone when,
I'm not around to hold,
You in my arms and,
Tell you everything's okay now, that,
Things will be okay tomorrow and,
You'll always be mine and I'll,
Always be yours, no matter what,
Happens, we'll always be together, just keep,
Dreaming, Keep seeing us together, just us,
In the rain again, like we always are,
Standing in the rain, washing over us until,
We have to part, the pain, unbearable, we can,
Never say goodbye, I always shed a tear, but,
I know I'll see you again soon, it's just so,
Hard, to keep from crying when you're not around, I,
Wish, I could be with you forever and ever, just like,
In the movies, the ones we said we could be part,
Of, a little sweet surrender from our reality, back to you again,
Tomorrow, find it so hard to keep away from you for even,
A second, feeling you presence is not enough to keep me sane, I,
Need you, Every moment, every day, every second, every breath, I need you,
Forever, Please don't leave me, I need just one more moment with,
You, just one more second, with you, just one more sigh, One,
More breath, one more tear with you, my love, I need,
Just one more smile, one more kiss, just one more touch,
Just one last whisper, please just one more glint from,
Your eye, just one last cuddle, only one bitter sweet,
Embrace, Please don't leave me, I need you here,
Just one last laugh, just one more word, I,
Need to hear your voice, please don't leave,
Me here, I need you like oxygen, like,
The rain, I have to see you, I,
Have to have your touch, I need,
To see you smile, I have to,
Have your words, your whisper, your,
Knowing looks, your laugh, I just,
Need you, I have to,
See you every second of,
Every moment of every,
Day, I love,
You, never leave,
Me alone,
I am,
Never,
Alone...


NB: The first poem was about loving someone no matter what. The example of being hurt was probably not a terribly good one but it works for me.
The second poem was about finally finding that one person you've been missing your entire life. You feel alone on a crowded planet until you find them. Like a missing piece of a jigsaw puzzle.
The third poem is basically meaning that most people who fall in love are quite the opposite of one another. I don't like the last 2 lines but meh.
The last poem is my pride and joy. It's about feeling that you're never alone when you know they is going to be someone there for you in the end. It's about falling in love and even though you hate being apart, you know that if you keep the memory of them in your heart you wont ever really be seperated.
I like poetry.
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Default  09.24.02, 20:50:07
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Heh, again, I am really impressed Rei. You've really got a talnet, and reading your poems is kinda fun.
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Default  09.26.02, 19:03:37
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WOW!!!! Speachless!!!!!
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Default  09.29.02, 04:27:17
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Yeah, same here. Damn Rei! These poems are hella good. You have got quite a talent!
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Default  09.29.02, 04:38:13
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Good stuff rei. Keep it up.
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Default  09.29.02, 17:58:46
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damn those r great indeed keep it up
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Default  12.08.02, 15:16:09
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