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Default  [P] Attrox's Poetry
09.15.02, 20:54:06
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Something About You
by Attrox - 9/15/02


There is something about you
I don't quite know what
But something about you
That keeps me coming back

Ever since the day we met
Until the day I die
We will be friends
Even if your an ocean way


That is just a short little poem I wrote after a friend that I am growing to love, and if she's reading this, she'll know who. It was my first poem in a long time, and since it's late at night, I decided to make it short.
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Default  09.16.02, 03:09:10
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Nice, simple, effective. I like Sometimes the simplest of poems can have the most powerful of meanings... nice one Mitch
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Default  09.16.02, 06:10:45
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I would have made it longer if I wasn't so damned tired, lol.
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Default  09.17.02, 00:27:37
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Aww! ^_^ It's lovely. It's simplicity makes it what it is, without that it would be a big puddle of mushyness mixed with a few nice words ;D Lucky gal she is Tis very meaningful and touching. *hugs Mitch* Good work buddy

EDIT: The bit about the mushyness came out nasty! please note it wasn't supposed to be the way! :O
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Default  09.18.02, 19:54:02
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Lol, thanks Rei, and OneWingedAngel_. If it was "mushy", oh well.
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Default  09.19.02, 02:41:19
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I like your poem, Attrox.

It's very soothing.

Makes me smile because of it's meaning.
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