There is something about you
I don't quite know what
But something about you
That keeps me coming back
Ever since the day we met
Until the day I die
We will be friends
Even if your an ocean way
That is just a short little poem I wrote after a friend that I am growing to love, and if she's reading this, she'll know who. It was my first poem in a long time, and since it's late at night, I decided to make it short.
Aww! ^_^ It's lovely. It's simplicity makes it what it is, without that it would be a big puddle of mushyness mixed with a few nice words ;D Lucky gal she is Tis very meaningful and touching. *hugs Mitch* Good work buddy
EDIT: The bit about the mushyness came out nasty! please note it wasn't supposed to be the way! :O
Sometimes the simplest of poems can have the most powerful of meanings... nice one Mitch 
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