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Default  [P] Crimson's Poetry
09.15.02, 06:34:20
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Most of the poems I'm going to put up are some of my first ones. Then I lacked a good vocabulary and good structure...not too much *shrugs* I hope you all like them.
I wrote this one when I was 12 and had experienced on hate and racism for the first time.
Poem 3 "Hate"
Why must we hate
What reason do we look to it for
All that it adds up to
Is blood spilling on the floor

Of all the violence in this world
I had to learn about and see
Its not fair to anyone
To nobody or to me

Nobody deserves it
Nor you or I
It tears us apart
It makes me cry

Why must I be born
in such a hated place
To be around others
who hate your skin tone and face.

Eventually we'll leave
and go to another place
A place with love
and no more hate
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Default  09.15.02, 15:41:45
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I appreciate the theme. It's appealing.
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Default  09.17.02, 06:40:28
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Heres another...wrote this one in 1999

"Outlaw"

You can call them theives
They break the law
They do as they wish
Whenever they want

They defy everyone
They have their own level
You want to be known as a rock
or a pebble

Make a name for yourself
Be known to many
Need no introduction
When you enter a city

With a gun to their side
they stand above the rest
Without a doubt in their mind
they do what they do best

You can sit in a bar
and glare to one in their eye
by the look he'll pull his gun
and then so will I

With crimson hair adrift
and long cloaks to their bodies worn
Besides the things they do,
inside their souls are torn
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Default  09.17.02, 06:42:05
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Some good poems, even more so since they were written when you were younger. Have any recent ones?
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Default  09.18.02, 07:35:11
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sure do OWA, this one I wrote a few nights ago I wrote this one this past monday. Hope ya like it.

Winter

To have felt that slender chill
blow upon you as it never has
The refreshing feeling that empowers your character
making you feel grateful for what you have

The first small flake of snow falling upon your nose
that gives your body goosebumps
The one time of year tha captures your very spirit
forcing you to have faith in others if not already

The misting and deadly death of your warm breath
hitting the cold air as if being stabbed by icicles
From the frozen lakes and ponds
with all life inside at a standstill

To the hard clasping of hands
feeling somewhat stiff like sandpaper
Looking upon the many bushes and trees crystalized
with your eyes not in shock, but filled with absolute awe

To have stood countless times
to see it come and go
Looking forward to next year
and of course, next seasons show.
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Default  10.16.02, 06:33:22
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"Untitled"
This aura that surrounds me
I haven’t the gumption of what it is
It tells me I am powerless
Endurance I shall exemplify
I shall show you what I can do
Against my limitations
Beyond my will
At a constant pace, never still
You doubt me, then you doubt possibilities
Your assumptions are false without actual truth
To run from death itself is far from being proud
As I would not run…but stand strong and tall
I tire of your words and your dull blade
You come at me and I will make you dearly pay
Your anger empowers your hatred for me
Tense I am beyond, for you have enlightened my every sense
Put them to good use are my intentions
As they will make all the difference
Duking it out to the very death
This is what you asked for, this is more then a test
Leave your sarcasm and insults
Preferably for some soul who’ll ignore them as I have
For today our swords will cross
Not metal vs metal but frustration vs anger
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