Hynes revivel is about.....well if you don't know already then you figure it out.It is also about the rumored Sorceress stone(holding every once of Hynes powers) being found and a race for our heros to find it before the baddies do.Enjoy :-D
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~Balamb town~
The thunder roared loudly and the rain clashed down hard as a man in a long black cloak ran towards Balmb town with a limp body in a garnet hooded trench coat in his arms.He huffed and puffed as he ran through the grassey wet feild.He ran into the quite town and quickly searched for the an Inn.He soon found Balambs local Inn.He quickly ran in huffing and puffing.His head was hung low as he walked up to the desk."Can i please have a room"he said in a cold out-of-breath voice.The woman was to busy stareing at the body in the mans arms with her eyes very wide with fear.
"What!Have'nt you ever seen a sick person?!Just give me the damn roon."he yelled in anger as small rain droplets fell from his black hair and down to the cerulean floor.
"Y..yes sir....room 1"She said handing the man his room key with a shakeing outstretched hand.
"Thank you" he said coldly.He walked over to the stairs and went up.
He entered the room.It hade two beds and a balcony.
He sat the body on the nearest bed and drove his hand over the hood removeing it to reveal a pale beautiful face.It was a woman with long silver hair and golden eyes.
"Lady Hyne...would you like me to go and do it now?"the man asked.
"Yes Leon....the quicker we find it....the better"Hyne said hoarsely.Leon smiled."I will be back lady Hyne"he said getting his black cloak on and heading out the door.As he passed the woman he glared at her with his cold golden eyes but the woman hade her head down and was avoiding eye contact with the man.The man walked out of the Inn and shoved his hands in his cloak pockets.As he walked he stepped through small puddles makeing them ripple.
Occasionally he'd see one of the residents of balamb peeking out there door just as they did when he ran through town.He soon found himself walking out of the entrane to balamb town and down the cement road to Balamb garden.The harsh raining hade stopped only leaveing small puddles behind.He drew nearer to the Garden....

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I hope you liked the first part....Oh and fixed those things and well..kinda changed the whole thing.Well sorry if it's still not fixed.later