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  Naraku
 
 
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Default  [P] - Soulstone's Poetry
09.11.02, 15:28:02
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Song of Love
For a special Girl
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Round and round, goes my life
Spiraling out from the stars
Dreaming of the one to come
The one to love tonight

Take my hand and you shall see
Your my angel I love so dear
Nervous I am, when we meet
Your love, soothes me down

Depression in vain, I wont look back
'Twas all just a dream
The woman I saw was just a myth
And never to be mine at all

Days fly by, nothing but loss
Until one day I see
The girl of my dreams marching in
Stealing my heart again

The day seems to slow, just for you
Your presence makes me smile
Now that I know your alive, no myth
My heart trembles with joy

Slowly I walk, touching your hand
Hoping that you'll enjoy
The sense of love, in the air
Unite our souls for good

Several years go by, indeed
The two are still in love
Three children running around
All in the power of god

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Default  09.13.02, 14:24:09
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Chaos Sanctuary
Hopes and Dreams, Lost
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This is the pain I whitness
Killing me slowly, within
Unsheathe my sword, hold it tight
Banishing those of evil

The lords of heaven shin upon
The lands of earth today
Some people only see fear
Lurking from within there heart

Sudden strike, grasping me
Nailing people for fun
The Santuary of hope
Keeps the light, shining in

This is my life, see it now
Don't quote me, no way
Everyone I ever loved
Turned before my eyes

This sword I hold, has much power
The certain power I need
Only for me, no one else
I shall smite all unpure

Lay down my laws
Firm as can ever be
Know only this, my friend
Your life.. pitifully taken..
-DemonZ-
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Default  09.15.02, 06:40:41
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I like the second one a whole lot DemonZ. Have any more?
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Default  09.15.02, 15:43:41
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The second poem is indeed very nice.
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Default  09.19.02, 14:00:51
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Nice poetry DemonZ . It's good that you dont try hard to make it ryhme........it spoils good poetry doin that, it loses all meaning and just becomes desparation to find words that will ryhme. I like the second one too.
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Default  09.19.02, 14:02:21
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The Mana Knight
Keep it hidden, the truth that is
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The armour it shines, yes indeed
My sword is gleaming out too
My polished boots, showing off
Sparkly, shiny helmet

This is the equipment of hope
The hope is a mirror of courage
And the courage is reflecting myself
My quest is now, do not fear!

Demons flee, back to there hell
Dragons cry out for mercy, too
The sword I hold is a symbol of light
It's reclaiming the evil intensions

Buckling up, I took a challenge
A stranger dressed in all black
My shield, It gleamed blue
Now is my time, to fight

A smirk guides, accross my face
Pimples appear all to soon
My hair waves from side to side
Swimming through the air, like fish

Sword out front, I charge at him
Along goes the blade all to well
The blood of death, spewing out
Nothing but a smile on my face

I take his cloak, trophy it is
The banished shal never return
Striving on this awful quest
Mana Sword, attached firm
-DemonZ-

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Default  09.19.02, 15:13:46
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I liked that one..it started off pretty bad but it was very good towards the ending. Very good yet again DemonZ .
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Default  09.19.02, 17:00:04
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Just Sitting Here
It's my poem, respect
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You looked at me once
So I looked deep in your eyes
Maybe it was just a hunch
But I could see through all the lies

You can bend my ear
We'll take a walk in rain
But no matter what I hear
I'll never forget any of that pain

I can still remember the first night
That time sitting there by the open fire
Your eyes, they gleamed so in the moonlight
But now that I'm gone, you've got no one else to admire

So this is the end
Now I'm just sitting here
Thinking back to the days
The days of pain, and the days of joy

Well my heart was always open
My eyes clouded by dreams
Your words, twisted to lies
Time seemed so slow, but now it rushes by

I know that you're sorry
I am in my own way too
But now there's just one thing I want you to know
And that's that in the end, you have to let go
-DemonZ-
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Default  11.12.02, 03:27:40
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Finding Truth
It's the hardest thing you'll do
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It's the hardest thing you'll ever do
Look up into the sun, and blind yourself
Look back down, at a ground so black

Let the winds pass you by
Think back to that special time
When everything seemed so real
So right...

There's something tugging on my arm
Pulling me away, and out of this memory
Something so big, none of us can understand
Running back, to find the truth

We watch those around us die
Our friends so long gone, it's hard to tell
We can't see the smallest things
Those simple pleasures, that once made it all
So very worthwhile...

So I run away, and I turn my head
I'll run from you, and run from myself
Run back to the days when it was all so clear
Run away from my life, straight to my grave

Siren's song, it brought me here
And hydra's gaze, shall set me free

Let me be free, let me cry alone
Let me be myself, let me sing this song
Let me have my memory
And keep from me, that horrible pain
-DemonZ-
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