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Basic Post  May It Be : Part I & II
08.28.02, 04:42:46
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Here are 2 poems that I created within a total of 10 minutes. They were inspired by my current experiences as well my past. Enjoy!

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() May It Be : Part I
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May it be for the powers that hold, to be those that were never told. A Republic in despair brings life to those who dare. Twilight among the bright skies, begin a revolution within our eyes. Bright nights and dark days, some things that will never haze. Release from the gloomy paths that becon to become, and make yourself the new oblivion to that hum. Whiten the world, find it's days, never forsaken, never give in, to be that is to be the ultimate.


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() May It Be : Part II
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May it be for an unforgiven path ahead, behind, and below. Find that sword, bear it within, to wrath in which it row. Another day forpasses the windy road. Another demon found again to it's worthy mode. Together again brings eternal peace. For there are those who will only seize. Depart a world for light above. Follow the path of the blinding white dove.
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Default  08.28.02, 04:53:55
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Nice it seems as there a quite a few poets in FFR.
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Default  08.28.02, 04:58:25
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In all honesty, that was a very strange poem afterlab.

It's all because of one reason though, Your trying to hard to make it rhyme. Focus on getting the point through by any means, even if the words dont rhyme... But, thats just my suggestion.

Still, very good for 10 mins.
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Default  08.28.02, 07:30:46
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Yes, Kazu.

Good job Eric.
I don't write poetry, only verse... (and I'm still crap)
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Default  09.10.02, 08:40:47
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Never thought you can write poetry. That's very impressive.
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