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Default  [Short Prose] false|PLEASURE
08.25.02, 08:11:20
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This is _really_ short, but I'm just curious to see if you all think it's nice.


"the heart pains as my soul bleeds tears of hatred
but my exterior is brilliant with the light of the fake
my heart becomes as brittle as the sunless flower
as the feather in my soul floats around with no purpose"
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Nice isn't the right word. But it's really good.
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Default  08.27.02, 20:19:56
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Thanks, WN! I appreciate it. I'm going to branch off of this and write a REALLY long poem...it should be nice.
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Default  08.28.02, 12:37:12
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Cool, Aerosol. Cant wait to see it.
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This is _really_ short, but I'm just curious to see if you all think it's nice.


"the heart pains as my soul bleeds tears of hatred
but my exterior is brilliant with the light of the fake
my heart becomes as brittle as the sunless flower
as the feather in my soul floats around with no purpose"
Hemeroids again aerosoul?
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