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Default  Terms of Perception (my poetry)
02.08.08, 14:00:28
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A collection of poems. I don't care if you've seen them before, I want them to have a thread of their own because the other one was spamtastic.

Here is my newest one "Taping Our Feelings to the Wall"

We're all in some naive world.
It's everything I shouldn't want to do.
Truthfully, I never thought anything of it,
Until that one desecrated night
When Jupiter looked down at me and decided
That I needed a little more work, after all.

Play a dirge for my old exsistence.
Cry out loud for what is to come.


I'm unfond of bodies.
Wouldn't it be nice to just be a mind and a soul?
That way, we wouldn't worry about
abusing ourseves
abusing others
only about abusing the minds we got stuck with.

We tape our feelings to the wall
It's not as permanent as paste or nails


Expelling the major renovations That what we used to be started And replace the sour bitter ugliness with chocolate dipped strawberries

Climbing like a rose on a trellis
Until someone knocks it down


Keeping in stride is kind of hard when you're as small as we are Our legs will never be long enough to keep up with change It's always running ahead of us before we get a chance to throw things in the cart that we think we need

Don't you just want to punch a hole in the sky sometimes?
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Default  02.11.08, 06:03:45
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Quote:
We're all in some naive world.
It's everything I shouldn't want to do.
Truthfully, I never thought anything of it,
Until that one desecrated night
When Jupiter looked down at me and decided
That I needed a little more work, after all.

Play a dirge for my old exsistence.
Cry out loud for what's to come.


I'm unfond of bodies.
Wouldn't it be nice to just be a mind and a soul?
That way, we wouldn't worry about
Abusing ourselves,
Abusing others,
Only about abusing the minds we got stuck with.

We tape our feelings to the wall
It's not as permanent as paste or nails


Expelling the major renovations,
That what we used to be started,
And replace the sour bitter ugliness,
With chocolate dipped strawberries.

Climbing like a rose on a trellis
Until someone knocks it down


Keeping in stride is kind of hard when you're as small as we are,
Our legs will never be long enough to keep up with change,
It's always running ahead of us before we get a chance to, throw things in the cart that we think we need.

Don't you just want to punch a hole in the sky sometimes?
Just removed a few spelling errors, added some grammar thar and such. Also, its set out extremely weird for a poem. Not that the poem is weird itself, just the layout of it.
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leaving for summer
 
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Default  02.11.08, 11:52:51
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I don't mind you changing spelling, but please don't fool with the grammar. Sometimes, especially in poetry, I won't use proper grammer. So please don't mess with it.
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Default  02.11.08, 12:34:32
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Ok!
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