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Default  [P] what do u think?
06.01.06, 00:20:54
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THE ROSE
There was a big rose, pretty and red,
That caused a big storm, then wittered away,
Now I am stranded in this dark Paradise,
Standing by others while showered by Lies,
Look into forever, lying in your eternal bed,
You'll never get up, or shine a smile on your face,
To never wake up, no matter the noise we make,
The pain in my heart only shown by tears that i shed,
The others around me give florals and such,
The have alot to give, but i didnt have much,
I just have you a rose, pretty and Red,
Red as the blood, that flows thru my Veins.

(Written while i was depressed in English class)





MEMORIES
All of theses nights there so cold and sad,
I’m haunted by memories of the times we had,
I remember the way you smiled,
When I said a stupid joke,
And the way I felt when,
From you lips a kiss I stole.

What ever happed to those days?
Where did they go?
Did you really had to go away,
I guess I’ll never know.

I remember that when you were around,
Time seemed to slow down for us,
As if to savor our time,
Let it not go to waste,
Now those moments have come and gone,
They have changed to memories of a happier past.

Whatever happened to those days?
Where they all a dream?
If they turn out to be,
I wish for eternal sleep.

I remember the way you taste,
How could I forget your breath?
Engraved deep down in my soul,
Leave my heart, it won’t,
And if it does one day, let me be cold…

(Written after me and my ex broke up last summer)



Well, these are the only two I have at the moment, I know they are not the best, so pointers would be greatly appreciated
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You took me home
I drank to much
Cause of you my liver turns to dust
Cold rust takes cold creeping cool pain
Do you understand what I need?
When u feel your soul drop to the floor
Like a whole like an open bleeding sore
Then you'll have bled like ive bled
Then youll have bled this all left
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