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Well, your best one is most definitely Kenshin. Great job with the colors on all of them, though. Now for the critique. Sorry if I might sound too pushy. ^_^'
On Axl, you need to bring his ear up a little more. Ears are usually pretty level with the eyes, so it shouldn't be too big a move. And, his right arm is a little stiff on the right side. Plus, his thumb is just a little long. The only thing left now is the finger on his other hand. I forget the name, but it's just beside the pinky. You made it too pointy. Just round it out and make just slightly longer and it'd be great.
On Slash, you stiffened one of his arms, aswell. On the left, you clearly see where you were putting in the muscle, but then you went off the muscle to a straight line. The muscle should curve into the arm. On the other arm, the bottom side looks a little too big for it to go into the hand at that angle. Lastly, the pinky is too small.
Now, Kenshin is the best one. The only real problem I have is the nose... It's too small. Extend it out more from his face like Axl's is. Other than that, I just don't like the hand on his sheath (it looks a little weird.) But, that's along the lines of hand problems that a lot of people mess up with. So, just fix that nose and it'd be pretty good. |
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Last edited by Shiro X : 06.10.04 at 19:55:47.
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