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Default  [Song]- Dreaming Disease
02.21.04, 21:08:22
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your eyes were stained like the crimson ruby red imprint of a heart on the inside of your fist where you clenched at my ventricle and tore with all your might, plucked each vein and organ out from my insides and strewn across your bed like a blanket, sleep in your regret tonight and smother yourslef in a quilt of liquidated lies, wipe your smudged lipstick with a kiss i wish i could steal while i ripped apart your heart, maybe now youll know how i feel, so criss cross my arteries like the wires on a bomb, and one more look into your eyes and im bound to go off. sometimes you make me wish i could sleep forever, so i could see you in all of my dreams, and use a scribbled smiley to hide what you did to me. take this razor and cut my throat, do as your told and finish what you started and cut as deep as possible, everything that drains out has your name all over it, and everything youve ever said drains out my body again. i wish i could sleep another day, whats the point when my dreams are infected with every word i wish youd say.
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Default  02.21.04, 22:30:57
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Quite a meaningful song, at first I didn't really know what to expect in that it seems a bit obscene and bloody for what I would generally read. Once I read through it a second time I think I began to pull out how you used the body as a symbol to how she made you feel. The idea of these dreams ripping the body apart plays into the title as a "Disease". Nice work on the song, in other words I really liked how in some way you can almost imagine how this person must feel. Kudos to you, this is a great piece with excellent lyrics and complex meaning
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