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02.16.04, 21:59:02
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well i havn't posted anything here in a very long time so here is a song that is kinda recent. i won't give a big explanation this time but i will say that i know the way it is written the verses sound kinda uneven but it works when its sung. i realy like this one actually. it is a ballad but it has its heavy parts. here ya go. as always any input is always welcomed and appreciated so please tell me what you think.

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what happens when the heart stops beating
what happens when the hum of the ampliphiers fade
what happens when the river stops flowing
what happens when this masquerade ends

what happens when the breeze ceases to blow
can you see my breathe through the expanding crowd
what begins when the game is over
when words disipate where do we go now
where do we go now
where do we go

what becomes of the seeds unplanted
how loud is the sound that noone hears
tell me who do you trust when everyone's behind you
tell me where will we hide when you're out of tears

i see your eyes tell the lies of the forsaken
tell me do your dreams retreat with the tide
in whose world do you confide when yours is shaken
shall i pray or shall i say that it is mine

what remains of your dreams when your fears subside
what solution within context will your mind construe
a pardoxal view of sanity overlooked
on which our world is balanced the basic rule

i see your eyes tell the burden of a soul forgotten
a tear on the edge of a state serene
a clynical ratiousness enshrouded with nosense
lightning bolts caught in sunbeams that go unseen
unseen
o can't you see

i can see faint footsteps in the sand
looking deeper i can find sets of eyes staring back at me
what will happen when it forms the cloak of its own demise
will this mind finally know what is and what will never be

and i know that you've been here
and again i've gone unseen
the unknown crow flutters away
as i've seen your tears at night in vain
so it goes but i know
i've heard you calling my name
i've been here all along
but nothing will come lest you give in to the rain

please excuse my lack of tact
somewhere the plan has caved from within
who am i fooling i never had a plan
theres only the rain that whispers to me
give in

what happens when the train derails
what happens when the mirror shatters
what happens when the clock stops ticking
you know what it doesn't realy matter
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