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Default  [p] M.E.'s Poetry
02.12.04, 01:59:26
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Hey, if you could all give me some feed back on this that would be great! Thanx!! 8)

Limitations

Limited to the sky, but not allowed to leave.
The feeling of entrapment is all I can perceive.
When can I go, when will I be set free?
When can I see all there is to see?
Living is not only for the sake of living,
But for the combination of taking and giving.
I have nothing more to give here,
Nor can I take one more stuck up sneer.
I need diversity and a breath of fresh air.
It cannot come from a wish or a prayer,
But from simply spreading my wings.
I need to set my spirit free until it sings!
This is a life long dream that will be filled.
And my stifled soul will not be killed.
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Sad Memories I Can't Recall.
Lover your enimies; it'll drive them crazy.
It doesn't matter if a cat is black or white as long as it can catch a mouse.
To be silenced is to be broken; the solution is to be outspoken.
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Default  02.12.04, 03:07:22
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I've read this from the other day, but like I said to you over AIM, it is a really good poem! You should be proud of it! I feel you on that, I mean to me I think you are talking about Walker because of the whole diversity thing, talking about you not having anything to give and spreading your wings out. hehehe... that is what the poem is about isn't it?
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Default  02.23.04, 03:34:18
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Sort of. It's a little more that that, though.

But please, if anyone has any structural advise, or something, do let me know.
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