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01.08.04, 14:15:06
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Time passes slowly, people come and go
You make friends, you lose friends
Women come, women go
But there is one person who has never left me since we met

She is one of the most important and influencing person in my life
My heart always leads me to her
Her feelings are more important to me than anything else

She is more than a friend
She always knows what to say
I hate it when she hurts…

I don’t know what I would do without her
I call her my Angel of Light
But she is far more than just that

She always has my love and admiration
When I talk to her I feel unusual
Like the world is a perfect place

Together we could take on the world and win
There is nothing I could not do without her by my side
She is so special; I don’t know how I would cope without her


My heart always leads me to her
Some know her as Quistis
I know her as Marl and I love her so much

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Default  01.08.04, 15:39:18
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This poem is just as good as the first time I heard it. You portrayed great emotion, and appear to be very open of your feelings. Which I should add is uncommon for man.

I'm glad you can find someone you trust in so much. I know how it feels.
Excellent poem, Davie.
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Default  01.09.04, 13:56:24
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Thats not to bad. Except it gets...not sure how to say it but uneven...Like a long sentence to a short one. And I agree, men don't like to share their feelings.
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Default  01.09.04, 14:35:12
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thx both of ya but Shrina Its my own unique style, its one I like to use.
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Default  01.09.04, 14:44:29
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Ok, if its original then its good style.
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Default  01.10.04, 10:19:44
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Excelent work there, pretty good poem, nicely written, but specially cause i understand completly what you mean, cause she's an outstanding person, like you say, always there to help out and always there for friends, i know how you two are great friends and it's really cool that you write her something like that

Nice work again
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