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Caught and Punished
01.03.04, 13:35:44
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I dont really write poems, i think i've wrote 4 poems in my entire life. So here is a poem i wrote, please give your honest opinion on it.
Caught and Punished
My time had passed,
I knew this was my final walk of earth.
As the jail door broke open and my hands were untied,
I could think of nothing but my family.
Although not even them could save me now,
I had given it all, to be captured.
As i came out the door surrounded by soldiers,
Just simply, broke my heart.
The hill approched, sending a letter of fear through my nerves,
The soldiers gathered 'round, as my hands were tied again.
And as the rope lifted me up 4 feet from the ground,
Soldiers got into a fashioned line infront of my eyes.
I could only wonder what was next,
But it was obvious, as a rock pierced my head.
I could feel nothing but pain,
But i knew, this would last awhile.
Stones and rocks came from everywhere,
Just inflicting pain,
Weather it were head shots, stomach shots, I knew this was the end,
And that i was going to be stoned to my death.
10 minutes had passed, my heart was collapsing before me,
I couldnt believe the fact, i was caught.
It was amazing to think, a robbery would get me this punishment,
And i believed in god to help, but nothing could.
Sounds of my theiving partner being hung was sick,
But to be honest, i didnt care,
I was probably in the most painful position ever,
But i couldnt help but think of my family, as they hoped i would return home.
It was a miracle i had lived the 12 minutes of stoning,
But i did it, my heart was too strong.
Even if there was nothing left of it,
I tried to force it to continue.
But, it wouldnt accept my words,
And died before me.
And as the final rock hit me before i passed out, i knew..
My time had passed.
Written by: Kosai |
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