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Default  Fleeting Dream
12.31.03, 13:41:07
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Fleeting Dream


A dream to not be forgot



Poet: Edward J. Brienza
Established: 12-27-03



Living in my heart,
this name I wish I forgot.
It's like a white sheet,
and then there is a red spot.

It cannot be forgotten,
although it is gone.
This name rests deep in my heart,
when will it depart?

The name brings hurtful memories,
I wish it would stop.
It is present in my dreams,
lives in my heart.

I wish I forgot,
I wish there were no red spot.
I wish it would dissapear,
whisper in my ear, I forgot

I wake up, it has been casted away,
but not for long.
The dream is present in my heart,
The dream will not be forgot.

This dream will not be forogt,
as dreams live in our heart.
Our heart will portray dreams,
and this fleeting dream, cannot be forgot.
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Default  12.31.03, 14:27:05
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powerful stuff Eddie. Well written, powerful imagery, excellent word choice. 10/10
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Default  12.31.03, 14:37:03
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Why thank you, Davie. Being that you, yourself are a remarkable poetist I consider your appreciation an honor.
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Default  12.31.03, 15:08:05
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Hrm..... It has some kind of Eric flow to it for some reason maybe because i just read erics return one again. Well keep working on it maybe making the lines a bit longer.
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Default  01.01.04, 03:09:41
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thats a strange rhyme sceme
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