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tulips are better
 
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Default  06.08.03, 11:37:21
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Untitled

It's been so long since i've felt welcome
since i haven't been alone
now i'm alone and cold
my body has turned to stone

My soul can't escape,
this depression inside.
I dream of suicide.

My body it aches,
my heart has died.

God make me better,
the devil made me cry.
Fix all my sins and mistakes,
don't let me die.

God are you there?
I"m starting to cry.
Why won't you answer?
Are you going to let me die?

God are you there?!
Why won't you try?!
To make me feel better,
I'm starting to cry.

Why?! Why God Why?!
Are you even there anymore?
Are we all alone?
Were you gone all along?

I'm falling into the black.
I'm drowning in the nothing you've left me with inside.
I'm going to go now.
I'm going, to die.
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Wandering Hero
 
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Default  06.09.03, 09:50:57
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how....depressing. I like it though. It's really good.
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  Ryan
 
 
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tulips are better
 
Posts: 926
 
Reg: Jan 27 2003
 
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Default  06.09.03, 09:54:43
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thanks, hmmm ntta, i'll be back later w/ more of em
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i'll listen to just about anything
my big fat greek wedding
do i have to choose?
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Default  06.09.03, 21:21:04
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good..... rhyme scheme change mmmmhmm..
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Default  06.10.03, 17:40:27
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You have a profound use of words here. In your poem, you are "cursing" God because He is never around to help you in times of despair. You called for him but He never came.

Good work. *donates*
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