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Faythful

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[P] Resonance
06.07.03, 05:09:32

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I wrote another song, please post your feedback, good as well as the bad, please.

[Verse 1]
Here I come
Don’t blame me
I haven’t succumbed
To your evil plot.

Fragments of space
Collide with your mind
The air around us is
Corrupt with anger.

[Chorus]
The space above us is
Resonating with every move
That glowing that you see
That is your destiny.

[Verse 2]
While you move throughout
This world constantly changes
Whenever you stop
So do the changes

But why? I’m not a god
Revolutions shouldn’t follow
I have tried so hard
Yet I still cannot win.

[Chorus]
The space above us is
Resonating with every move
That glowing that you see
That is your destiny.

[Bridge]
Above us a light shines
(Brightly)
Below us the ground shakes
(Violently)
Why me?
(Why)
I’m nothing special
(Or am I?)

[Chorus]
The space above us is
Resonating with every move
That glowing that you see
That is your destiny.

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yugijouoh

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06.07.03, 05:14:24

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Very good! ^^ Your good at this! ^^ Keep it up and don't stop becasue you can only get better! ^^
Your songs seem to speak from the heart and that is what will keep me reading them ^^ And hopefully someday listening.

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06.07.03, 05:27:44

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This is a great song. Although I lean more towards poetry than actual songs, I can say that this is well written. Keep on writing. *donates*

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06.07.03, 05:41:07

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it sounds pretty cool.. I wish that I could actually hear the song.. cause I have no clue what kind of rythme you are using.. but I get thte basic gist from the fragments.. anyways.. I see you post a lot of poetry.. and I like that.. keep it up..