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Default  "The Strange Brew"
06.05.03, 09:37:08
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I wrote this a long time ago.. and decided to post it.. again.. but I made a few revisions and I don' think anyone here will remember it.... Oh by the way it's one poem.

IN MY MIND

The Sleep:

As I close my eyes and drift away,
The images show a slow decay.
My life not now but in the past,
Trying to hold a moment that would not last.

>The door once closed, now open.
>I crawl up on this dim lit heaven.
>Drift farther down this road.
>Only to find it end.

My mind now wanders without control
I sense a pain, the bitter sorrow.
It was a time, a time I felt so low.
I couldn't look away, felling helpless.

>And the time went by,
>As I reach up to the sky.
>My arms stretched and spread apart.
>I will speak with all my heart...



The Dream:


I remember the first time she came to me.
She poured her heart out all night and cried.
I told her that for every love that dies,
There's a new love that's born.

>I never thought it would end this way.
>With walls, these tears, With regret till this day.

I made a promise,one I thought I could keep.
She gave me love and then she would weep.
For it was lies, and I was filled with them.
Couldn't take it back, she ran from me.

>I never ment for it to end like this.
>I wish I could rewind time, 'cause it's you I miss.

I'm all alone, where did the love go.
I couldn't contain, I blew up with rage.
This fire that burned and scared my memories.
For it was love and I did not know.



The Awakening


>I opened my eyes,
>Looked up to the skys,
>And see myself awake.

This feeling so new, so strange.
Like I've walked down from stage,
I can feel my heart, lightened now,
For I have faced the truth and must now move on.

I feel at last, a burdon off my chest.
Like I've slept a million years. Awake from rest.
I start a new day, a new way instead.
For now, I think, I know what lies ahead.
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Default  06.06.03, 06:33:37
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Wow, i really like this, its a nice poem and i know this feeling so it kind of reached out to me. *donates* Keep up the good work because you have a talent here
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Default  06.08.03, 03:11:00
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Damn dude....they are sweet man. That last one reminds me of The Matrix for some reason. Anywho keep em coming bro.
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