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Hmm. When you post inside the Shinra mansion, there are some rules you need to stick to. Threads containing your works should be labelled acording to writing form of the text/s you submit. I've taken care of that for you though.  There's a sticky explaining these rules at the top of this forum so please read it through before you post in here.
Secondly, your text is.. nice. But a bit confusing. It has no structure at all, no points or commas or anything. But maybe that's intentional..? I'd like to see some more of your work... |
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