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American Fairytale

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[ST] All your troubles
06.15.06, 04:22:07

Post #1 (permalink)

This was for a person at another forum, but please still critique and such. It'd be much appreciated!

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The Man

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06.15.06, 12:12:10

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'snot bad. I quite like the bulletholes; they add a rather nice touch.

roxy

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06.15.06, 12:23:24

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Hmm,I think I'd like it more without the bulletholes, not sure about the background either, but the colours I like and overall it's a beautiful set.Laguna is one of my favourite characters.

Imalia

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06.15.06, 22:34:17

Post #4 (permalink)

I have to agree with Roxy. The bullet holes throw the look of it off. The background would be nicer if was a little softer in colour, IMO. It's a little strong and overwhelming. A light texture over it might be nice, i think. Also gradually fading the opacity of the hair into the background would make it look a bit better and just make a nice gradient in general.

I'm not fond of the text font, but I think that's more a personal thing as I love the fancy ones ^.^;;

Overall though I like the look you were going for with this. I quite like the glow behind the text on the avatar and the target.

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Obsidian Tides

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06.15.06, 22:47:31

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looks like someone wants to assassinate Laguna, but has failed numerous times

the bullet holes are nice actually, but it seems a bit strange over the larger pic. the hair ought to overlap them or something. also, it's a little hard to tell what feel the sig is supposed to instill based on the quote and pics and such, though that mostly has to do with the user of course
i don't know a damn thing about PS though, so the technical stuff looks awesome to me =]

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