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I can see what you've done unless I'm a complete idiot but I don't think it works in this peice. If this was a large peice and way more was put into it I could see it working. Or if this was a fashion magazine image and you did more for correcting her skin and what not then I'd appluad you.
However you haven't really done much. The coloring looks bad with how bumpy and uneven her skin looks and also the font placing is really bad. The way you've got it slanted looks really weird to me.
It's not bad at all. I just think there is a lot of room for improvement. |
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