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Default  [S] some old things
05.20.06, 12:43:53
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ive gotten into graphics over the past year now and had to learn alot of stuff on my own so just seeing what people think of some of my stuff ive done.




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Default  05.23.06, 10:33:13
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1: I like the simplicity in this one but I feel the colours are a bit too strong, especially in the top middle.
The planty thing behind the font also has pretty strong colours, I think you could get away with that being much softer and lighter. The text works fine.


2: WHOA! Ok, bit of an insane acid-trippy one. The background doesnt work with the characters at all. It's bright and clashing and just doesnt match. The typo is VERY difficult to read over the insania background but nice font.

3: A style which I see all over the place now. The thing is, I dont see it as somehow which takes a lot of work or creativity, so its not something I enjoy too much. The character blends in pretty well but rethink the typo, as I cant really read that, try making it brighter or just giving it a slightly stronger border.

4: Really interesting backgroiund here, did you make that from scratch? I think more could be done to blend in the stock, they just seem seperate from it.
Not the most interesting of fonts but it's ok.
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Default  05.23.06, 11:35:19
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Minus the third they're all quite monotone and boring. You're also killing the work with your fonts. They whore all the attention which is quite a bother to my eyes as I'm not sure what to focus on. Your blending could use some work aswell..
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