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My first actual wallpapers
05.15.03, 23:48:32
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These two are my very first actual wallpapers I've made...they're not good but niether am I..so be gentle
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I have seen happiness, and have held love, but they ran from me, just as all life runs from its body, hapiness and love ran from my heart, as the tears ran down my face the one came to me, she helped me come to myself, to find who I was, and then love returned bringing hapiness with it, and the tears stopped running down my face, then I noticed, I was finally at peace Yes before you ask....I am Lesbian
The Second Female Grand Summoner
Last edited by Katsumi : 05.15.03 at 23:52:41.
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hehehe..I'll try not to go too harsh...
well it's very plain and basic...it doesnt have the wallpaper look...your images need to be cut out better and blended in better....the BG is just horrible....3/10 |
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| I'll just ignore you...seeing as your not taking into account I've never made anything before...and that you have no banners or a custon Avitar..so why should I care what you think |
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quite good. both are a lot better than my early attempts at Graphics.
and i really like the boogiepop phantom one.
so i'd give you
8/10 
and also....
* Donates * |
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| Awww thanks you really don't need to...but thanks its nice to see members who take skill into perspective |
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First off, next time please label your thread title ^_~ I'll do it for you now.
Then about the wallpaper's:
They are good for a start.....there are lots of people who start into graphics with much worse attempts.....
They still need some work though.
Both are too plain.....I mean....wp's surely need some space where people can put icons, but those two have way too much space left.....either use bigger pics or maybe two different ones...
First wp: Hmmm....the placement of the pic is good...and it's blended nicely, as I said before, too plain overall...a bg needs a bit more than just a gradient.
The text placement is not good....it looks out of place right beside her....move it up or below her and a bit more to the middle.
The font itself is unfitting too.....there are so many great fonts available....you should go and download some. The text coloring is just horrible >.<'' sorry. That multicolor just clashes too much with the background color.....text most likely looks the best when it's matchy with the bg...either a tint darker or lighter.
Second wp:
Same as the first regrading the bg, image placement is good a well, but the cutting is bad here....you might wanna get rid of those little white edges all around. Zoom in into the pic and use the eraser with a little brush and then carefully erase those white edges...that will make it look a lot better ^_~
*donates and edits thread title* |
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I wish I had what I needed to be on my own, 'cause I feel so defeated and I'm feeling alone.
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| hehe thanks for the extremem review I'll go in now and fix #2 and later I'll redo the first one...but I like the font :P but ohhwell thanks!! and I didn't know what to put in the title |
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They are not bad for your first attempt I like the second one more though. It looks much clearer and balanced than the first one. I don't feel that the text in the first one matches the pic either.
Keep up the good work |
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Well, they're alright, actually I mean, the characters look cool and all, but you should use the same characters, maybe add some filters to them, like motion blurs, or something, and then try and put some little graphics in the background. But, good work overall.  |
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Gaia, where I am always hiding 
