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  Broken Wings
 
 
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05.08.03, 13:03:22
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here is a banner i did for a forum i am a co-owner and admin of tell me what ya think*its the attachtment*
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Default  05.08.03, 13:21:35
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I would not have made Rikku and young Tidus transparent... it seems a little out out of place to me. But other than that, it looks good to me. It's a nice sharp image with bright colours and is nicely balanced.
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Default  05.08.03, 13:25:20
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I like the Balamb Garden background. It looks really good.
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Default  05.08.03, 13:37:06
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It is too plain, it lies on the same graphical design you have been producing for the past few months, and it is not getting any better, I am sorry to say. I think you need to work more on fonts mainly, more than anything, and then learn how to produce a nice background. This is one of the worst things I have seen you do.

You should add some effects around the cut out characters to boost the image over all, and, I think you have exhausted the use of the Kingdom Hearts Cloud in your banners. In fact, I am quit sick of seeing him now. xD

Over all, not one of your best pieces. 5/10
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Default  05.08.03, 16:29:39
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okay..5/10....


how to improve...

-blure the garden a lil more
-cloud doesnt fit neither does tidus and riku
-smaller sig...too big makes mistakes easier to spot..
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Default  05.08.03, 17:36:21
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you put Aristy at its best. And its ugly man iz like more ugly den your sig your style has been really bad latly.
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Default  05.09.03, 01:05:56
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meh i know i guess i need to take a break i cant seem to concentrate lately im hoping to get out of this slump im in
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Default  05.09.03, 04:30:08
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you put Aristy at its best. And its ugly man iz like more ugly den your sig your style has been really bad latly.
Don't listen to him, Adam. :/ I honestly wouldn't even LOOK at a post from this guy. I mean, for one thing...he's just insulting you. Not even bothering to make suggestions and help you improve. Plus, the guy doesn't even have a sig himself. O_o

Anyway...mmn. I give this a 4/10. You really need to start trying new things, new fonts. Plus, the background just doesn't go with the characters. And uhh...aristry. Gotta be careful of typos. xD

The only thing I'm glad of is that you didn't use more rounded edges. You've seriously overdone the rounded edges thing lately. :/
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Default  05.11.03, 02:08:11
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Don't listen to him, Adam. :/ I honestly wouldn't even LOOK at a post from this guy. I mean, for one thing...he's just insulting you. Not even bothering to make suggestions and help you improve. Plus, the guy doesn't even have a sig himself. O_o

Anyway...mmn. I give this a 4/10. You really need to start trying new things, new fonts. Plus, the background just doesn't go with the characters. And uhh...aristry. Gotta be careful of typos. xD

The only thing I'm glad of is that you didn't use more rounded edges. You've seriously overdone the rounded edges thing lately. :/
Ditto to everything Nic said ^_~

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