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I would shrink down the pic of Ayumi more. Atleast so that you can see where her knee is comming from. Right now, it's a blue bump coming out of no where. (alteast, that 's the type of stuff that I was told to keep an eye out for back in the days of my photography class)
But other than that, it's good. It has some nice, sharp bright colours. I would maby make the background a little more darker as it is a little hard to see right now. (not by much mind you)
But I say it's a great second attempt   |
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