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01.28.03, 22:41:20
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here is a wallpaper i made for cloud strife the badass of FFVII plz rate and tell me what yall think of it
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Default  01.28.03, 23:01:18
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I'm sorry, but I don't like it. All the colors clash . I don't like how cloud is beveled like that. Maybe try sticking with one color scheme, and definatly some better font . 4/10 Oh, and ditch the swirly in the bottom left.
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Default  01.29.03, 00:01:09
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Hmmm, I do like it actually. Now don't get me wrong [constructive citicizm] It's really not that great... But you are still learning, and you are learning well. I've seen some **** before believe me =P This aint that bad.. Tips.. Outer glows are good, but just clicking on the button and not adjusting the colors/options are bad. I actually like the bevel on cloud, but overall im not a big fan of bevelling. The airbrushing looks good except that its to big and gloppy, keep it smaller and try blending it in better.. the background could of useed a tone down on coloring perhaps, it is kind of busy. The thing I really dont like is the typography.. its just really bad... i like the down scale but its too huge too bright too beveled, it doesnt fit. Just remember to look at your work, for a very long time, and think about every detail, others points of view, presentability.. everything. Don't stop working on something till you are sure to at least yourself its a masterpeice, not just a, " ah im improving " peice, your own personal masterpeice. and the next will just top it, and you will keep getting better and better ^_^ ;;; [/ constructive critisizm] *donates*
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Default  01.29.03, 00:03:52
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wow thx bro and i will take all of your advice and use it with all my heart
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Default  01.29.03, 06:42:22
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And it'll probably be good if you don't fade cloud as well.. it seems kinda awkward that he's faded..
Some part of the wallpaper are cut as well.. you need to fix that too..
Just keep working on it.. and take Sinny's advice.. it'll surely help you out..

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Default  01.29.03, 06:55:46
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IMO its ****.... the colors are bleh the Font is Bleh the Faded cloud is Bleh cuz he has teh bevel you screwed Midgar up.... and you mesed Midgar up again with the Liquafiy

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