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Some advice...
In order to let rpers have a clearer perception of your character, your descriptions must be sufficient enough to allow us to know them well. Spells must be balanced.
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-Ability: Dark Tracker: Tracks enemies by scent.
-Ability: Double Weilding: Weild two Keyblades
-Ability: Dash: Super speed. Moves so fast that she leaves an image of herself behind for a split second
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-Dark Tracker: Tracks enemies by scent, but requires a small amount of mental energy and concentration, letting its user vulnerable for a small amount of time during battles.
-Double Wielding: Allows to dual wield keyblades by spending speed and dexterity. The weight of the keyblades varies from key chain to key chain used to enhance the keyblades themselves.
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-Drive Forms: Wisdom, Master, Time, Anti, Final, Eternal(?)
-Limits:
(with Karen) Cherubic Collapse
(with Riku) Dark Hearts
(with Sora) Eclipse
(with ??????) Crimson Flight/quote]
Overloads:
=Ancient Wisdom: Unleashes the power of the keyblades by summoning the gathered knowledge of the ancient ones held within. Greatly enhances speed and magic, allowing more spell casting and mana recovery. As a setback, it causes Strength to decrease significantly.
=Master Hearts: (master form) golden aura surround the caster, greatly increasing all stats. Due to the amount of energy required to sustain this form, the user must not exceed a certain limit of time (you can choose the time).
=Cronos Form/Time: The form of the keyblades that control time itself. Allows its user to move at a blinding speed, traveling through the currents of time and even delaying the passing of time. As a setback, it reduces STR and DEF.
=Corrupt/Anti-Form: A form in which darkness sprouts from within the users heart, swallowing whole for a certain amount of time. As a negative effect, user can not used keyblades seeing that dark beings can't fully wield the powers of light.
=Eternal Form: This is the ultimate form, born from unleashing the soul's power as well as the full potential of the keyblades. The bounds of the key chains are broken, making the keyblades trully the ultimate weapons. They are no longer required to be held by hands, the user can control them with his/her mind and so the keyblades remain hovering around the user, awaiting for their next command. The user has the ability to float and glide at great speed, but the necessary energy required to sustain this form is too much to be kept for long periods of time. Along most enhancements, the change of eye and hair colors turn from cyan blue to silver, the clothes change to a mixture of black and white designs.
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-Magic: Fire (firaga), Thunder (thundara), Blizzard (blizzara), Dark, Gravity (graviga)
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These need work. Instead of using FF spells, why not make some of your own original spells, or even base your spells on already existing enchantments with different names?
Other than that, this character has potential to be developed greatly. |
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I can't agree more with this quote...thanks Moondoggie...
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