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ya definately have a certain *umphhh* for writting....
the theme seems to be the wonders of being alone
and the poems tie nicely into it. ya also have one hell of a
stanza structure for the first poem AB AB AB CD CD CD....
it's pretty hard for some people to keep that up...Huta...
well enjoyed by us... |
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If yuh real badman nuh fraid fi buss gun (WOO!!!)
When mi a come up don't stand up just run
Mi mek blood stain fi get a custom
(BLOCKA BLOCKA!!!!) First serve to first come (HA!!!!)
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