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...hmmmm
i can tell that there was a lot of
emotion put into this one...and i
feel that i can make a connection with this poem
*sighs*
What i noticed that was interesting was how ya used
oxymorons (sp) ei., "sweet stench
to me that get across a feeling that can't be described....
well done and i enjoyed it |
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If yuh real badman nuh fraid fi buss gun (WOO!!!)
When mi a come up don't stand up just run
Mi mek blood stain fi get a custom
(BLOCKA BLOCKA!!!!) First serve to first come (HA!!!!)
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