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Love's Suicide
 
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Default  11.30.02, 23:28:04
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I must know where I stand in the world of Poetry. This is my first work so excuse any misspellings and such.


Blind

I don't have control,
I'm searching for my soul,
All the lies,
Alone my heart cries.

I can't see,
who i am to be,
I'm blind,
my heart i can't find.

All I feel is hate,
and i fear it's to late,
for me,
for I am blind and can't see.


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The tides will part,
love shall leave the heart,
hell will swell the shores,
broken hindges on unlocked doors.

Hope a dream,
a crystal's gleam,
the end will near,
we'll know no fear.


An empty room,
an early tomb,
a mournful eye,
and our hollow cry.

Last edited by Hybrid : 12.09.02 at 15:59:58.
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